13 September 2011 @ 03:55 pm
Title: If You're Gone
Author: [livejournal.com profile] sahiya
Rating/Pairing: PG-13, Peter Burke/Elizabeth Burke/Neal Caffrey
Word Count: 31,381
Spoilers: None
Warnings: None
Summary: What do you do when the people who've become your Pole Star move three thousand miles away? Neal Caffrey is about to find out.
Author's Note:

This was written for the 2011 White Collar Big Bang, but it has been in progress since November 2010. As such, it does not take into account the second half of season 2 or any of season 3.

Many thanks to everyone who has given me advice about this fic over the last ten months. [livejournal.com profile] jaebi_lit helped me develop the original idea and looked at multiple drafts to help me figure out issues in plot and tone. [livejournal.com profile] canaana looked at an early draft and gave me the courage to kill some significant darlings. [livejournal.com profile] yamx came in at the end to look at it with fresh eyes, which helped immensely. And, last but not least, so much thanks to [livejournal.com profile] fuzzyboo03, who has seen so many versions of this story that she's probably even more tired of looking at it than I am.

Thanks also to my artist [livejournal.com profile] queenofthebobs, who made a wonderful fanmix to go with this fic. Please check it out - it has some great music on it.

If You're Gone on AO3
 
 
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[identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com on September 14th, 2011 03:15 am (UTC)
I loved this! The premise was interesting and rather heart-wrenching -- I liked the detail about both Neal and Peter having to get drunk to deal with the decision they'd all made -- and I really enjoyed reading Neal and Diana as friends. Nice resolution for everyone's careers too. *applauds*
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[identity profile] sahiya.livejournal.com on September 14th, 2011 04:51 am (UTC)
Thank you!

I really enjoyed writing Neal and Diana as friends. That was one of the best bits of the whole process for me.
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elrhiarhodan[personal profile] elrhiarhodan on September 14th, 2011 07:21 pm (UTC)
I am loving it and I want to kill AO3! I can't get to the third chapter, the damn server is down. It's killing me.

Your story is brilliant, original and simply beautiful. It's making me ache.

*shakes fist at Ao3*
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elrhiarhodan[personal profile] elrhiarhodan on September 14th, 2011 08:10 pm (UTC)
Okay - finished it (and still mopping up the tears).

Truly one of the most original stories I've read in the fandom.

I'd like to do a front/full page rec for it on White Collar Fixation - may I include the artwork with the rec? Is there anything you'd like me to say about the story? The rec will either go up tonight or on Friday.
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[identity profile] sahiya.livejournal.com on September 14th, 2011 08:35 pm (UTC)
Oh wow! Thank you! *blushes*

A rec would be awesome. The artwork is a fanmix, rather than visual art; if you'd like to include it, I'm sure the artist would be very happy. Otherwise, I provide a link to it in my A/N.
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[identity profile] sahiya.livejournal.com on September 14th, 2011 08:49 pm (UTC)
As for anything interesting to say about it . . .

Well, for me, one of the most interesting aspects of writing the story was doing it as S2.2 and S3.1 were airing. The characterizations (especially Neal's) changed so dramatically on the show that it was quite strange to be working with them as I saw them at the end of S2.1. But it was really nice, too. It was going back to happier, simpler times on the show, when I think viewers were able to take Neal and Peter's friendship for granted in a way we can't now.

I was also very intrigued by Neal's relationship with Diana. I love Diana, because she's so tough; it was a lot of fun to write her as Neal's handler. In some ways, I think she'd be better even than Peter as Neal's handler; Peter lets him pull things that Diana never would. But they're friends as well, and she's clearly amused by (some of) his antics. I enjoy writing friendship more than anything else, I think, and any 'ships that I write are going to have deep friendship at their core. I was very glad to get to explore Diana and Neal's friendship in more depth.
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elrhiarhodan[personal profile] elrhiarhodan on September 14th, 2011 09:06 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I will post this on WCF this evening.

Again - it was terrific and confirms your status in my personal pantheon of WC fic writers.
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elrhiarhodan[personal profile] elrhiarhodan on September 16th, 2011 02:08 pm (UTC)
The recommendation has been posted on White Collar Fixation.

We like to lead each article with a picture - and the only reason why I choose the shot from Company Man was because it was the icon you used in this post (and it's a lovely domestic moment).

Thank you again for agreeing to the rec and letting me add your words to it.
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[identity profile] sahiya.livejournal.com on September 16th, 2011 02:44 pm (UTC)
Oh thank you! That's such a lovely review. I'm just grinning and grinning.
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[identity profile] ceares.livejournal.com on September 20th, 2011 09:48 am (UTC)
This was marvelous! I loved the Peter/Diana bonding and partnership, loved that he was actually better behaved with her because it highlights how much of his behavior is about attracting/keeping/proving Peter's attention/devotion. Terrific characterizations, with a particularly lovely El...especially in the scene where she goes to see Neal after he and Peter get drunk and in the hospital scenes. Poignant and achy even expecting a happy ending, which did not disappoint.
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